water breaking free
ice clings hopelessly at edge
remains of winter
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Great haiku Teresa.
Nice Haiku and you have captured the melting moments very well!!
This reminds me that even we are capable of holding on helplessly knowing it won’t help.. very well written..
and that ice shall melt too, Teresa.. but they’ll return later. absolutely
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Chilling….
This was a wonderful haiku, Teresa. It has so many meanings…and sometimes letting go is the hardest thing.
Lovely haiku!
wonderful transitionary haiku
very influential
well done,
helplessly stay at the edge, winer remains, true.
you haiku fits the image beautifully.