Haiku Heights #33: Cold

5 Mar

water breaking free

ice clings hopelessly at edge

remains of winter

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11 Responses to “Haiku Heights #33: Cold”

  1. shanegenziuk 5 March 2011 at 6:17 pm #

    Great haiku Teresa.

  2. Nanka 5 March 2011 at 11:29 pm #

    Nice Haiku and you have captured the melting moments very well!!

  3. Ramesh Sood 6 March 2011 at 12:06 am #

    This reminds me that even we are capable of holding on helplessly knowing it won’t help.. very well written..

  4. Leo (Leonnyes) 6 March 2011 at 10:30 am #

    and that ice shall melt too, Teresa.. but they’ll return later. absolutely :)

    Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

  5. G-Man 6 March 2011 at 10:39 am #

    Chilling….

  6. Talon 6 March 2011 at 12:36 pm #

    This was a wonderful haiku, Teresa. It has so many meanings…and sometimes letting go is the hardest thing.

  7. Madeleine Begun Kane 7 March 2011 at 1:40 am #

    Lovely haiku!

  8. ladynimue 7 March 2011 at 9:20 am #

    wonderful transitionary haiku :)

  9. meethimirchi 7 March 2011 at 11:55 am #

    very influential :)

  10. Jingle 8 March 2011 at 10:17 pm #

    well done,

    helplessly stay at the edge, winer remains, true.
    :)

  11. Madeleine Begun Kane 12 February 2012 at 9:59 pm #

    you haiku fits the image beautifully.

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