Imbolic

2 Feb

February 2nd is Imbolic or Groundhog Day if you prefer.  It’s the half way point of winter.  It’s a perfect time to start thinking about spring whether it’s going to be early or another full six weeks of wintery weather.

bare trees in winter sun

For Real Toads, the Sunday Mini Challenge is to write a Cinquain.  It’s a 5-line poem with a syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 2.  It’s often about nature, uses imagery and has a twist at the end.  It also needs a strong title.

snowy hill

Imbolic

Snowy

Winter’s blanket

Covers flowers and rock

Deep beneath earth’s deathly white shroud

Spring blooms

snowdrift shadow

For Haiku Heights, the theme this week is Pride.

winter sun behind clouds

foolish winter’s pride

sunshine chases cold away

promise of spring near

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16 Responses to “Imbolic”

  1. Grace 2 February 2013 at 3:36 pm #

    I too wish spring is near but not yet…I like the cinquain form ~

  2. kateri 2 February 2013 at 4:51 pm #

    Love it. The little twist at the end it perfect.

    • aprille 2 February 2013 at 5:15 pm #

      Are you sure about Spring being under all that chill?
      Love the skeleton trees against the clouds.

  3. Marian 2 February 2013 at 5:45 pm #

    beautiful! i had to look up your strong title :)

  4. Susan 2 February 2013 at 6:05 pm #

    Beautiful nature and its oppositions.
    I’m about ready to dig up that spring.

    • Poet Laundry 2 February 2013 at 8:26 pm #

      ‘earth’s deathly white shroud’…i like that description of snow. Nice capture of the season in your cinquain and haiku too.

  5. Helen Dehner 2 February 2013 at 8:51 pm #

    I have learned a new word today, all thanks to you and this ‘wishing for spring’ poem.

  6. kkkkaty 3 February 2013 at 12:08 am #

    ..all are turning to spring topics now…pushing it’s way here almost ..;)

  7. isadoragruye 3 February 2013 at 2:59 am #

    beautiful photos and words!!!

  8. Laura Hegfield 3 February 2013 at 9:23 am #

    these are lovely…I’m listening to birds sing of spring despite a fresh powder of snow from last night:-)

  9. Loredana Donovan 3 February 2013 at 2:57 pm #

    Beautiful photos. Love both the cinquain and haiku :)

  10. Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly) 3 February 2013 at 7:38 pm #

    Such beauty here in word and image. It never really gets cold here for very long yet I wish for spring.

  11. Ellen 3 February 2013 at 11:04 pm #

    I love the offering of hope in your poem! :D
    fun to read and imagine!
    I long for spring~

  12. readinpleasure 4 February 2013 at 7:22 am #

    lovely haiku. Very nicely crafted. :-)

  13. wkkortas 4 February 2013 at 8:38 am #

    It’s almost more of a haiku in feel and subject, but it’s an admirably tight cinquain, which seems easy until you try it.

  14. ElizOF 6 February 2013 at 5:22 am #

    Gorgeous and I can’t wait for spring too. :-)
    Eliz

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