Home » d'Verse Poets » The Days of Old

The Days of Old

Tending a garden with loving care

Her friend lost his life on a dangerous dare~

the old man lays his hoe down

Sorrow makes her feel as if she will drown;

and walks to the house for his lunch

she misses her friend, the best of the bunch

topped off with a single slice of apple pie.

and she’s left reaching for his star in the sky.

The days of old have passed away

a time of hard work that brings pride

days filled with tasks and projects

necessary for living and growing and learning

Now too much time with nothing to do

lack of motivation keeps kids down

depression, obesity, meds and pain

makes me wish for those days of old.

Linking to the open links for Real Toads and d’Verse Poets.

Advertisements

13 thoughts on “The Days of Old

  1. Reminiscing about the past can bring such joy in perspective. And it does seem that what we enjoyed then has lessons for those who are living now. Passing on such awareness to others in poetry is the best possible way to help others grow as we have grown.

  2. nice…really nice progression in this…i really like the opening cleave and then into the regular verse…it is symbolic in a way…and you know there are def days i wish for the days of old…

  3. The structure of this poem forces the reader – or me at least – to look at the narrative from both sides of the equation. Inventive, and an intriguing verse.

I love to hear from you, so please leave a comment. If you are having problems leaving a comment Wordpress has made changes to require you to log into your Wordpress or Gravatar account associated with the e-mail address. You can try a different e-mail address, or I have enabled people to leave a comment without an e-mail address. Sorry for any inconvenience because I love hearing from you and want to make it as easy as possible for you to communicate with me.

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s