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D’Verse Poets has introduced us to the poetic form known as la lune.  It’s similar to a haiku but counts words rather than syllables.  One form has 3-5-3 and is the Collom Lune.  The Kelly Lune has 5-3-5.

songs running through my mind

singing a melody

cheering my heart and soul

tuba keys

icy notes of the flute

trilling and thrilling

flying through the auditorium’s indoor sky


love’s melancholy song

heart breaks like guitar string

no replacing it


I’m going to have to go visit the band room for flute and guitar pictures.


10 thoughts on “Lune

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  2. The musicality of your theme and words is amplified by the simplicity of the lune. A beautiful voice.

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