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Crossing the Bridge

I’m a bit late, but I’m joining d’Verse Poets with the challenge to write a poem about a bridge.  I’m also sharing with Real Toads for the Tuesday Platform.
red-bridge

A path through the garden,
winding and twisting,
leads to secret places.
Discovering along the way
truths timidly revealed.
Approaching with caution
a  simple foot bridge–
the path to a new start–
leaving all behind.
You can’t untravel
a garden’s path.

 

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9 thoughts on “Crossing the Bridge

  1. Nice, I like the word choice “timidly” as compared with, for example, reluctantly. Suggests the secrets never wanted to be secrets but were waiting for the right moment to be revealed.

  2. SMiLes.. FriEnd..
    i’m juSt finishing
    a poem toniGht..
    one could noW
    caLL iT a bridge
    i suppose.. Tree..
    or Lamp of 990K or
    so words.. perHaps
    A Bible too.. NoW iN
    66 MacroVerse ways
    aRound 15K words a verse..
    in 7 and a half months and i guess
    the reason this bridge reminds me oF
    it aGaIn as i am cloSinG in the last Micro-Verses
    of this 66 MacroVerse now.. is.. JuSt ’cause iT is..
    a MaRk
    oF
    noW
    to beGiN
    aGaIN.. UnAbridged..:)

  3. …you can’t untravel a garden path….Oh I lOVE this idea….and the idea that truths are “timidly revealed” as we travel over the bridges of our life…such a detailed word to use “timidly” and it really adds to the poem. So glad you posted! 🙂

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