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Crow Beneath the Moon

I am combining challenges from Mindlovemiserys Menagerie where today’s Tale Weaver challenge is to write about the moon and Real Toads where Fireblossom Friday is back to challenge us to write about crows.  I choose to do the challenge in the form of a triolet.  I’m also sharing with the open mic for d’Verse Poets.

 

A murder of crows
beneath the silver moon;
from the tree tops arose
a murder of crows.

Their raucous cry grows
leaving me in a swoon–
a murder of crows
beneath the silver moon.

 

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19 thoughts on “Crow Beneath the Moon

  1. Great job with the form, and I’ve always thought a murder of crows was appropriate for a bird that can sometimes be a little creepy. I’ve been dive-bombed by one before, and it pulled out a bunch of my hair! Kinda crazy.

  2. I recently learned that a “murder of crows” is what I mean by a “flock of crows”. It’s an interesting word. These black birds must be a wonderful sight against the whitish moon.

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