Wishing

I am late joining the weekend challenge at Real Toads, so I’m also linking to their Tuesday Platform.  The challenge is to write a poem using the Cherita form.  It is a six line poem with the first stanza having one line; the second stanza has two lines; and the third stanza has three lines.  In addition, it has to tell a complete story.

wishing upon a star

seems to be the only way
to fix the mistakes I’ve made

No way to go back in time
and hold on to the words
I carelessly uttered hurting you

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5 thoughts on “Wishing

  1. Sorry IS a powerful word which sometimes heals. Well done – 6 lines doesn’t leave us much, but you succeeded

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